These days most of the children and adolescents are addicted to computer games, it leads to adverse effect on their mental ability and physical growth, many doctors are really worried about these vibes in young generation. In this essay we will discuss the problems with extreme usage of computer games and try to draw the feasible solutions.
The major disadvantage with electronic games is, The children or teenage guys who are playing electronic games are unable to mingle with others, they are becoming introverts, and they are unable to express their opinions in the mob. It causes to predicament to their career growth.Secondly, the rate of physical growth in electronic gadget users are less when relatively comparing with non computer users, It's a perilous move to their personality development. Thirdly, the maturity levels, general awareness and communication skills are also high in the adults who are getting involved themselves in the physical activities instead of electronic games. Finally, most of the psychological surveys reveals that the students who are indulged in physical activities are stood top in their academics as well.
The above well described problems can be eradicated with small changes in adults daily regime, educational academy's involvement and with the government innovative ideas. Firstly, Parents should encourage their children to bring in yoga, gym or any other physical activity in their routine, and also they should impose time limits on their kids computer usage. Secondly, educational institution's should inculcate the physical activities in their curriculum and they can provide a portion of reservation to the students who are participating in physical games. Finally, the government must promote the advantages of physical games and they should increase the state level competitions more to instil the competition spirit in adults. If people follow these ideas we reduce the electronic gadget usage levels in adults.
To sum up, Electronic gadget usage arise plethora of problems and it leaves the next generation in passive manner, so the doctors, educationalists and philanthropists are worried about this act. We as a responsible citizen should try to reduce the usage of electronic games and needs to pass on the message to our fellow citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42618384401 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90692246971 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534818941504 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2620733074 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.846153846 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206674666349 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745223698233 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544524165945 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144836386179 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803661454704 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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