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According to the recommendation presented, a few facts are delliniated on Super Screen movies and a conclusion of the recommendation suggests that the budget for advertisement should be increased to reach public through advertising.
The recommendation suggested by the advertising director implies that positive review from the movie reviewers increased though the number of audiance has decreased.He concluded that it implies that the movies has good quality. But one point should not be overlooked that the definition of '"Quality" differs between the movie reviewers and the mass people who are the ultimate audiance. While the movie reviewers focus on precise and sharp qualities mostly depending on the asthetic value, the mass people largly means the entertainment factor as quality. So,there is chances, even if the advertisements are increased, the audiance will remain absent if the quality defined by them is absent.
Another point is that the advertising director mentioned that there was positive review for specific movies. So there is a great possibility that even the quality defined by the movie reviewers are lacking in other Super Screen movies.
There is no information about the economical condition of the country in the recommendation. So it can't be said if the absence of the audiance is due to economical recession of past few years rather than the advertisement factor.
It should not be overlooked that the recommendation is given by the advertising director. So it won't be exaggerating to say that he has his own personal interest to meet with through the recommendation. So the neutrality of the conclusion does not remain beyond doubt.
Therefore,recapitulating the evidences and the flaws within it,we may still remain skeptical about the conclusion until the above mentioned questions are not answered. And so we can not say for certain that SUper Screen should allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reach public through advertising.
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- "We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whoseviews contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning." 66
- A Nation should require all of its student to follow the same curriculum until college. 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation not competition. 50
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the entertainment factor as quality. So,there is chances, even if the advertisements are increas...
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...e quality defined by them is absent. Another point is that the advertising di...
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...acking in other Super Screen movies. There is no information about the econom...
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...he country in the recommendation. So it cant be said if the absence of the audiance ...
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...ather than the advertisement factor. It should not be overlooked that the rec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 13.6137724551 88% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 28.8173652695 80% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 16.3942115768 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48717948718 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32906531494 2.78398813304 120% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9839312523 57.8364921388 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.218282227539 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0743258471296 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0701772020484 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.128457276422 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.5979740519 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 98.500998004 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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