T P O 40 - Integrated Writing Task
According to the passage, there are lots of problems on Venus that make it impossible for a human to live on it permanently. For instance, great atmospheric pressure, no water or oxygen available, and very little sunlight on Venus surface make it hard for a human to live.
The lecturer states that besides these conditions, living in the Venus is possible and all the problems are handlable for following reasons.
First of all, he suggests that as pressure is lower above a surface, by having spacecraft floating above Venus's surface, we can have normal pressure like what we have on the Earth.
Secondly, Although there is no water vapor or oxygen on the planet's surface, by some chemical process using compounds like carbon dioxide, chemical materials that human needs, like water and oxygen, can be produced. So, there is no need to maintain it from Earth.
Lastly, despite the fact that there is very little sunlight on the planet's surface, the cloud which fills the atmosphere is not that thick; therefore, the reflected sunlight can be used to generate enough electricity that human needs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 30.3222958057 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 1373.03311258 67% => OK
No of words: 184.0 270.72406181 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98913043478 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56169157103 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 145.348785872 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576086956522 0.540411800872 107% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 419.366225166 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.23620309051 36% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7920268493 49.2860985944 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 21.698381199 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06452816374 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374895820956 0.272083759551 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157766077047 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500545341534 0.0662205650399 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177982102625 0.162205337803 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543364259239 0.0443174109184 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.3589403974 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.2367328918 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 63.6247240618 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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