In many countries recently young people have been living far from their parents from the time they began studies or work until they married. Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages of this trend?
It is incontrovertible fact that nowadays people leaving home at an early age it is common trend. The young people living far away from their parents when they started their education and worker or marriage. However, it has more merits rather than the demerits. I will discuss the cons and prone in my upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with there are plethora of reasons why do the study and work far away from house has a lot of advantages. The first and foremost is when people started live alone for the study and work purpose it is increased the overall personality of the people. Because, a person learn, how to manage all the things in proper time. For example, he or she does the study as well as household chores and some other works. And, they gain the more knowledge because they experience the various situations which he or she does not experience in their house. They manage all their official and personal work alone without the help of their family and another people, and they become a self dependent people.
To continue with my view points, where they are lived sometimes there are no better job and study opportunities so, people go out for the business and the education in further countries or cities. Because, there are full of opportunities for the job vacancies or the educational system is also very good. Moreover, they enjoy the strong relationship with their family because they live far away from their family in many year. And, the importance of family also increased their mind.
In conclusion, there are myriad of advantages to live alone as compared to the disadvantages. Because, people became confident, self dependent and self-esteem and their personality is also increased.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 418, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'many years'.
Suggestion: many years
...they live far away from their family in many year. And, the importance of family also inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92413793103 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63792878071 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531034482759 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7046914576 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333747565429 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962069455801 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087601338824 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189024735771 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622970993164 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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