Most people accept that we now live in globalized world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalization a positive or negative development?
21st century is century of research and with technology advancements whole world is like global village now. It is considered my many that we live in globalized world now while other argues that this development is not good for society. I consider this as an positive development because globalization is bringing people from different nations closer and boost their economy.
Firstly, globalization bringing opportunities for developing countries to grow and improve their population standard of living.People from developing nation are more keen to learn foreign languages so that they can enhance their skills and work around the globe. Many companies from developed countries like US, UK, Australia are taking help from Asians countries to boost their business and this also gives employment to them. For example, many US Software companies are taking support from India and similarly Hardware companies seeking help from china.
Secondly, With increase in globalization we understand other countries culture, music and films. For example Hollywood films are becoming popular in Asia. Technology is playing crucial role, people from different countries communicate through social media website such as Facebook, twitter and understand their culture.
On the other hand, young children are more influenced by other countries culture and this is cause danger to their own traditions. for example, youngsters from Asian countries are more attracted towards western culture and they have started following their traditions.
In conclusion, I believe that globalization has more positive impact on society and people feel more connected now but we should not stop following our own traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69411764706 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83386995393 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596078431373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4905692392 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.0 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220866126392 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945472317238 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910071934794 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139587975546 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116027060097 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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