Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
In this busy competitive world, time is an essential component of every individual person. Moreover, for students utilizing the time in perfect way should help them to build their carrier potentially. According to my point of view, the children need to concentrate on their studies when they were in school, however, after their study hours it is worth to spend some time on physical activities.
Initially, students are spending most of the time in the schools only. Now a days, they have extra classes and study hours in the classes itself. Children do not have much time after reaching their homes. I believe that, parents have to give some free time for them to refresh themselves by playing games or any other activities such as learning music, dance and so on. These physical activities will improve their fitness levels as well as concentration and alertness. So many researches proved that, the children who involved in extra curricular activities were also has good educational marks also.
Moreover, if we involve children in their leisure time in our house hold activities, that will help them to learn the day to day activities which their parents are performing to survive every day life. Internally it will help them to build the proper responsibility toward the family members and allow them to think in critical situations. In many cases, children restricted by their parents, were not able to react as per the situation in the correct time. Their will not get more exposure to enlarge their knowledge towards the society or world. Obviously, if this is case with most of the children in the society,that will impact the complete younger generation thoughts.
In conclusion to, I feel we need to give some expensive time to every children to grown up individually with optimistic thinking about the next generation and wealthy society by spending their time free in sports and other activities.
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Suggestion: According
...them to build their carrier potentially.According to my point of view, the children need ...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...g most of the time in the schools only. Now a days, they have extra classes and study hour...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...st of the time in the schools only. Now a days, they have extra classes and study hour...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...es were also has good educational marks also. Moreover, if we involve children in...
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Suggestion: , that
...with most of the children in the society,that will impact the complete younger genera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, well, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07278481013 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80179479582 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556962025316 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.0598651222 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359193070005 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121264632024 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899985506533 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228764187064 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420767728325 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.