You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course.
Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you can not continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that, I am unable to make it happen to attend the evening class. At my work place i was assigned with a new project.
As I already informed to you that, i have been working as a permanent employee in a software company. Recently, my manager told me that a new project has signed be client and i should start work on that complex task.
Moreover, I should attend the calls with the client every day evening. In addition to this, my colleague is also on vacation who can share my work in critical situations. By the time i complete my calls and work it would be too late, so that, it may not be possible to continue the course at this point of time.
However, I assume that this assignment will be completed by next month. After this work, i would have enough free time to to pick the missed classes by spending more time to learn.I would request your time to teach me by scheduling a new course plan for me.
I will look forward to your reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Divya Garapati.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...am, I am writing to inform you that, i am unable to make it happen to attend t...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...end the evening class. At my work place i was assigned with a new project. As ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... a new project has signed be client and i should start work on that complex task....
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Line 7, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...work on that complex task. Moreover, i should attend the calls with the client...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ork in critical situations. By the time i complete my calls and work it would be ...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...urse at this point of time. However, i assume that this assignment will be com...
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Line 9, column 90, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...mpleted by next month. After this work, i would have enough free time to to pick ...
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Line 9, column 120, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...his work, i would have enough free time to to pick the missed classes by spending mor...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... classes by spending more time to learn.I would request your time to teach me by ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours Sincerely, Divya Garapati.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43229166667 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39274597271 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0459939924 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3636363636 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217497298673 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700201200024 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062631242152 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105475897782 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521008025194 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.