Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Most people enjoy travelling because it gives them an opportunity to enjoy themselves and the beauty of every place's uniqueness. Even though there are some arguments on whether travel with a tour guide is convenient or not, I believe travelling by themselves is more interesting and also beneficial for people for the following reasons.
Above all, when you travel by yourself, the time is enough to see all the things that you should do such as enjoying the view and taking memorable pictures. The tour guides have a tight schedule that cannot allow the people to do those things. I do not think that it is a great idea to spend your money to limit your travelling time, it will be a waste of your money. Moreover, taking risks to try something new is one of the most striking arts of travel which ceased by a tour guide because it affects their job or salary.
Another reason is that without tour guide we can see the view that is not popular but beautiful. For example, when I went to Italy without a tour guide with my friends, we only know the name of the places we have to go. However, when we lost one day because no one gets a map with them which led us into the beautiful local church that is not known for many people. The people of that church are friendly and polite, the only thing that dominates there is peace. I am really happy to find that church accidentally even though I could not see the most popular one.
All in all, sometimes taking risks makes life tastier and enjoyable. I strongly suggest people travel without a tour guide because it will give you another experience that you have not imagined.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'places'' or 'place's'?
Suggestion: places'; place's
...njoy themselves and the beauty of every places uniqueness. Even though there are some ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, really, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 296.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51351351351 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35080764139 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527027027027 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1470284586 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.769230769 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181935929359 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625521049921 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448376016469 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109867765013 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353021788714 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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