Advertising can tell you a lot about a country.
I disagree with the statement that Advertising can tell us a lot about a country. It is not proper to say that Advertising can tell a lot about a country, because there are many other things that can tell us a lot about a country like political leaders, sportsperson, scientists, GDP of a particular country.
Nowadays, Advertising of a particular product can tell a lot more about that product only. In this 21th century most of the production company are worldwide. Their product is sold in every place of the world by the company. So that for the marketing purpose they make an advertise of the product in a such manner that, that advertise can be telecast in every country in a same manner. Hence, they would only change the language by dubbing a advertise for a particular country. If they want to make different advertise for different country then it can affect to the company in order to money loss and time loss.
For an example, a production company like lekme, fair and lovely, fair and handsome etc. are very well-known company in entire world. They are making many advertise with respect to every country only not for a particular country. And then they dubbed that advertise with respect to a country. It is better to make a unique advertise for a product that can attract more people and every people in the world in place of making a different advertise for a different country which may time as well as money consuming.
There is a possibility that a new company will come in a market. Then, they should make an advertise of a product for a particular country by taking the aspects of that country, recent trends and many other things. They cannot make an advertise for a whole world because they are just a new comer.
In sum up, It is not proper to say that advertising can tell you a lot about a country but it is proper to say that advertising can tell you a lot about a particular product only. Because there are many more things that can describe the whole country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... order to money loss and time loss. For an example, a production company lik...
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...may time as well as money consuming. There is a possibility that a new compan...
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...and many other things. They cannot make an advertise for a whole world because they are just...
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... a lot about a particular product only. Because there are many more things that can des...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58938547486 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59607832527 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.36312849162 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8813568619 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2777777778 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8888888889 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47309982112 0.236089414692 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174394907498 0.076458572812 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.196700105778 0.0737576698707 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.353275644624 0.150856017488 234% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236272709676 0.0645574589148 366% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 86.8835125448 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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