Some people think that children should start school sooner while others believe they should not start it before the age of seven. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that, sending kids to the school in early years is beneficial, while others argued that after the age of seven is the better time for schooling. However, in my opinion, the best time for schooling would be before the age of seven, because, this age would be the peak time for enhancement of learning ability, improvement of communication, adaptation and so on
On the one hand, many people argued about early schooling that, students may able to mingle with co students and which would be good for their learning ability and communication skill. Since, it is often believe that, grasping power and linguistic capability would be predominant during the early years of age in most of the kids. Owing to the fact that, kids who went to school before getting seven may have a chance to get a fundamental aim of studies, improve memory , intriguing nature and so on. For instance, nostalgic memory of kindergarten thrive the enthusiasm of study, arts and sports was higher than the students who started the school at seven, BBC reports from , different countries.
On the other hand, people who oppose about early schooling may mention regarding the failure of connection with parents and siblings to some extent. Lack of attachment towards the family member often decline the safe and security feelings from the home atmosphere would be the another matter. Similarly, stress and pressure of the syllabus may inhibit kids entertainment of life, and consume play time activities for studying. At once, such volatile curriculum may lead to lack of interest in study activities and that would be detrimental to the core. For example, government of Canada, emphasize to the education department to minimize the content of study for the preschoolers.
On balance, both arguments has individual reasons to emerge, nevertheless, in my perspective, sending early in school would have betterment in many ways to achieve. The consequence of nostalgic and bonding related facts would be managed by parents after the schooling through questioning, chatting and so on.
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- it is inevitable that as technology advances traditional cultures will be lost it seem that we cannot have these things together to what extend do you agree or disagree this statement 48
- The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some parents believe that children should not waste time by reading entertainment books, but instead they should spend time to read educational books only. What is your opinion about this? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, regarding, similarly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1741.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16617210682 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.796220569 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540059347181 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0838150273 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.083333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0833333333 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8333333333 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149223975077 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554356848713 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579842185533 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963000866426 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592287929153 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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