Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficulty, such as Sahara desert or the Antarctic.
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Tourism has emerged as one of the fastest growing sectors in recent years. Today, there is hardly any place on the earth which have remained unvisited, and peoples interest have significantly developed in distinct and discrete places like Antarctic and Sahara desert where the environmental conditions are extreme. There are both positive and negative facts associated with visiting such locations.
The foremost benefit tourists seek in these travels is a unique experience where they get a chance to enjoy different cultures, climatic conditions and unusual creates which they have been studying in the books. People consider it as a once in a lifetime opportunity. For example, recently, one of my gallivant friends went to Antarctica to quest his thrust of traveling to the coldest place and to play with penguins. He was jubilant and over the moon to turn his childhood dream into a reality as he would have never experienced it in his usual life.
Flipping to the other side of the coin, firstly, such travels demand a hefty amount, as they are exceptionally far and not commercialized. Because they are extremely expensive, it shakes their budget for an extended period. Secondly, due to the drastic change in climatic conditions, people encounter varied health problems. For example, being from India, a hot and humid place, when my friend reached Antarctica, his heartbeat stumbled because of the change in the weather.
Overall, a voyage to unconventional places is both adventurous and risky and has its advantages and drawbacks. But, considering the trend, plausibly, such travels are expected to rise in future. Given this is not a cup of cake for everyone, so people should sagaciously adjudicate for such trips considering their financial and medical conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2701754386 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88746561526 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7841068663 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220602482494 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590349928057 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051010006379 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12494803423 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535331585483 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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