It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement?
Is saving more important than spending in today’s world?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words.
It is often considered by some that, money savings is a good practice when compared to spending every now and then. However, in my opinion, excessive spending's for unnecessary things make situation more worst not only in future but also present. At once, money saving behaviour would likely to have prosperous life now and in the forthcoming years and probably for the next generations.
To begin with, it is good to have some money for the future usage or for the unexpected crisis in day today life. In brief, people who had an interest to save money may help them to cope with the stressful situations in life like emergency medical care, retired life usages, and for the sake of children. To illustrate in my life, during my college days, most of the inflating tuition fees payment done by the savings of my father when he was young. Moreover, saving money in terms of insurance, health policies, would help the people to be more relax and volatile free life in order to arising dilemma in the future. Saving money may help the investors to get interest for the saved money that would be more beneficial and helpful in some extent. For instance, retired couples from my family explain that, their daily needs may fulfilled by the interest which they got from the fixed saving deposit of one bank.
On the other hand, people who is spending huge amount of money for the daily needs and enjoyments would have deleterious impact on their life. In other words, even the future life is not predictable, many people suffering from the financial dilemma in some stages of life. Shopping craze and spending money for unsound life style may lead fail to joint the two edges of life in later life. For instance, many students would have struggling for study materials and resources by the reckless expenditure of their parents. It is a true phenomenon that, people who lived a life irrespective of saved money would face many challenges in the future by the influence of global financial crisis or inflation.
To sum up, some daily spending is essential, nevertheless, lack of saving may lead to detrimental effect in the near future. Thereby, it is better to have some earnings to be saved in secured area an that would help the people to surpass crisis and overcome the issues independently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...good practice when compared to spending every now and then. However, in my opinion, excessive spen...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'worst' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: worst
...s for unnecessary things make situation more worst not only in future but also present. At...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ife, during my college days, most of the inflating tuition fees payment done by t...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...me earnings to be saved in secured area an that would help the people to surpass c...
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Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and that'?
Suggestion: and that
...me earnings to be saved in secured area an that would help the people to surpass crisis...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o surpass crisis and overcome the issues independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, for instance, in brief, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1901.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80050505051 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.508615651 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.494949494949 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.9196115532 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.8125 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184892700193 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767215554317 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330935618343 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130226414758 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291538064756 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.