Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Considering the positive effect of computers on the life and made life easier and more convenient, I am strongly inclined to take the side of this statement. Being one of the most proliferated technological subjects, the computer plays a critical role in the society development. Regarding the characteristics of the sustainable development, the main goal focuses on the life enhancement of humans. To elaborate more on the topic mentioned, however, the following reasons and examples will be presented.
First and foremost, the main advantage associated with computers aid can be indicated as an accessibility to share information which called the Internet. It is undeniable that in a modern society there is causal relationship between the use of the Internet as the main product of the computers development on the one hand, and the life efficiency on the other hand. For instance, the use of computer and consequently the Internet bring about applications for travel management, work scheduling, food ordering, etc. All these applications can be referred to the human utilization of the Internet as a prominent product of computers to make life more convenient.
Another primary reason can be indicated as the capability of computers to manage enormous tasks simultaneously and prevent squandering of the time, expense and human sources. Regarding the orientation of computers, the essential subject in introducing computers in human life is management of massive calculations. Further, numerous applications and programs are developed to eliminate the repetitive, boring and monotonous works which are achieved by human sources. For instance, in an industrial center, the use of computers in addition to increase efficiency categorically, provide a situation to assign human workers in the appropriate positions.
Taking all these perspectives into account, I cannot agree more about the significant benefits of using computers in human life and its crucial role to provide life more convenient. Regarding the capability to share information and management enormous tasks simultaneously, I absolutely signify the main advantages of computers usage which outweigh the probable disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 285, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'computers'' or 'computer's'?
Suggestion: computers'; computer's
...the Internet as the main product of the computers development on the one hand, and the li...
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Line 3, column 662, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...computers to make life more convenient. Another primary reason can be indicated ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 43.0788530466 21% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6586102719 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3414880642 2.67179642975 125% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519637462236 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2176910345 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 133.785714286 100.406767564 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245282142365 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900049031663 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701695421039 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161992467678 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512791927167 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 58.1214874552 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 10.9000537634 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.01818996416 126% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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