In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and measure to overcome this trend.
The people of some nations have been seriously suffering from obesity and thus, physical standards have also been lowered. Undoubtedly, I think there are few causes which are responsible for decreasing health levels, pertinent solutions should be implemented to alleviate this menace.
The deep-rooted causes of poor health have been recognised in terms of malnutrition food and physical activity. The street food which comprise of junk items and adulterations has now become a modern trend of eating. For example, although the preservatives and chemicals that have been used in food makes the taste better, but they do not often provide proper amount of proteins, carbohydrates and vitamins as of normal balanced diet. At the same time, the longer sitting working hours and lesser physical exercise mainly affects the health badly, and eventually results in gaining more weight.
To cope-up this problem, some practical steps should be taken. In order to improve our health problems, people have to avoid the low quality food strictly and should shift their interest completely towards the more balanced diet which would help them to keep their calories in control. Planning all the daily tasks prudently will give people some time, they can devote towards their health. For instance, joining a yoga classes or gym would definitely give tranquility to mind and physical fitness. These altogether will raise the physical standard of modern era people.
in conclusion, lower health level is a serious concern and more awareness should be given to dwellers to make our society healthier and happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: COMPRISE_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprise' or 'consist of'?
Suggestion: comprise; consist of
...hysical activity. The street food which comprise of junk items and adulterations has now be...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this altogether' or ''?
Suggestion: This altogether;
...anquility to mind and physical fitness. These altogether will raise the physical standard of mod...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...sical standard of modern era people. in conclusion, lower health level is a ser...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35968379447 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59641377589 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648221343874 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6919882755 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171096463522 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588606398239 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418412696866 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970478647652 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305368645262 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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