Museums are the only way by which all things can be preserved. A few people believe that one can enhance their knowledge about History while seeing the old objects in a museum whilst other argue that media is a better way to create awareness about history. I would discuss both views with my own perception.
On the one hand, in the museum, people can see the historical objects which develop their interest in history. With these objects, they come to know about a How their ancestors live, what type of clothes they used to wear, people come to know about their living standard and how they used to live without any facilities. Hence, it enhances their knowledge about history. Secondly, in museums, they see the objects in real but on television, they do not give much attention to that things. So, in museums, they can touch the objects, they can click photographs which will develop their interest in them.
On the other hand, some people cannot visit in museums as museums are not located everywhere but they can this on TV, the internet and on some other things. So, TV and internet also play a significant role. Moreover, all types of historical objects are not available in a single museum but on the internet, one can watch every type of object and can read about an important role in enhancing the knowledge of the public.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that it is unfair to support or oppose anyone both have their own significance but I still prefer Museum as they provide live experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71804511278 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4236810325 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9400319987 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.583333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229249479406 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878056808338 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775396545282 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144057436868 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848295403554 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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