People who graduated from universities are more likely to migrate into developed countries. Even though they can get higher salary or effectively build their career, this movement brings problems for their own nation. However, there are several solutions to tackle these issues.
One of the biggest problems faced countries is lack of skillful man-power. Because of insufficient number of talented workers, communities cannot completely use the rights such as to live healthy and to educate. For example, in my country, patients have to wait for long time to get their medical check-ups and treatment due to that hospitals have not adequate professional doctors. Therefore, a number of people who work in abroad grows, which makes poorer countries more difficult and as a result, citizens suffer a loss.
In my opinion, the most proper decision to solve this issue is that government should improve their working environment. Because the main reason why professionals want to work in foreign country is higher salary and more chance to become globally. However, if their native nation has similarly conditions and comfortable surroundings or give them privilege, they will not move to another place. For instance, government of India recently have more focused on public services by discounting schools’ fee for children of doctors or teachers. Consequently, the number of immigrants to work has decreased.
In conclusion, talented people move to more developed countries, which leads to sever problems for their own state and its people have disturbs to get public services which plays crucial role for public. Thus, the good way to tackle is that under-developed countries should prepare more admissible life to live and work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, similarly, so, therefore, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41544117647 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8458993408 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2603164656 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200505875069 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670388109122 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359526793817 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125847125024 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258584344956 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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