In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In contemporary life, in order to prevent the fact that there has been an increasing number of people suffering health issues due to consuming too much fast food, the government need to impose a higher tax on this food. In my opinion, i partly agree with this statement because of some below reasons.
To begin with, there are grounds that imposing the higher tax on unhealthy food is essential in order to reduce the risk of heart diseases and obesity and save more money. Because fast food is fried into deep fat , it could lead to the overweight situation for eaters. According to the WHO( world health organization) , they refer that 60% of children in Asia is obese owing to fast food. Regarding saving money, although the price for a fast food meal is not exorbitant, consuming it for thousands of times is a huge amount of money .fast food consumers are able to save money from halting using unhealthy processed food, spending it either to take care of their children such as taking children to good schools or to travel after nerve-racking working time.
However, i have to admit that the higher tax on fast food would induce many dire consequences to job opportunities in food industries and temper the growth of transportation. Naturally, if fast food industry does have a capacity of achieving more revenue no longer because of the decrease in purchasing for this type of food, the salary for employees will be reduced, worse, the workers probably are put at a great risk of unemployment. Moreover, it is able to have a negative impact on delivery particularly home delivery as people may are not willing to purchase food with higher prices
In my conclusion, although the government enacts a law related in the higher tax on fast food, which brings undeniable benefits for the local’s health, its disadvantages for economic and job prospects could be deliberated. i suppose that the government and other social organizations need to seek more useful approaches to balance the economically sustainable development and people’s health.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98546511628 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86557887988 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578488372093 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
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Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.795287588 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.5 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.4 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348979228978 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143870778916 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906276709433 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227774674917 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895579064192 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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