What kind of work a labour does that is matter for their job satisfaction. some think it is better different job so that they won't feel boring by doing the different tasks. But, time saving, easier to do the tasks and to master in specific are one must do same that in turn give satisfaction to us. So, I Disagree with statements which states that different kinds of tasks give job satisfaction rather one type at all the time. Here, I want to some real examples and explains to support my view.
First of all, satisfaction is depend on how we perceive it. When we don one type of long then it is very to do that tasks within given period of time. For example, I used to do the sorting letters in courier office during by college time and every time I use sort out within an hour that way employer felt proud of me-that reward made me feel like I got job satisfaction. Some people says that it is kind boring and they feel like their not learning new in doing the same tasks repeatedly. That is not core for happiness about your job.
Secondly, the way we working is very important for mind get satisfied. Doing different kind works need for more time and skill whereas when we do job regularly, we feel it is every use to do it. For example, some people working hardware shop for long time, for them finding solution for the field they working much easier than those working like all rounder-that is not expecting from a company, it is all about quickly rectify it. More we expose to a job is easier to perform in long run which makes us feel happy about our job. Fewer states that broaden knowledge and skills can be achieved through doing different kinds of job.
Finally, doing one job at all time makes you mastery in that particular field. For example, I am physical therapist working since 14 years in this field and I know how to handle certain critical situation even without awareness about it. That shows my great skill and talent when it is needed. This will make me feel more happy about my job. It is possible when you concentrate on one task, otherwise highly impossible to do it. Some people thinks after all it leads to monotonous lifestyle.
To conclude, the time saving, easiness in doing work and to achieve the great skill and these milestone for our satisfaction in job. So, in order to get these, one must do the one task at all time. This way merits of doing one particular task out-weigh the concern of demerits of it own.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
What kind of work a labour does that is matter for their job satisfaction. some...
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Suggestion: Some
...t is matter for their job satisfaction. some think it is better different job so tha...
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Suggestion: depended
...iew. First of all, satisfaction is depend on how we perceive it. When we don one ...
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Line 4, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...action is depend on how we perceive it. When we don one type of long then it is very...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t is very to do that tasks within given period of time. For example, I used to do the sorting ...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...e do job regularly, we feel it is every use to do it. For example, some people work...
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...n for the field they working much easier than those working like all rounder-that...
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Message: Did you mean 'this milestone' or 'these milestones'?
Suggestion: this milestone; these milestones
...work and to achieve the great skill and these milestone for our satisfaction in job. So, in ord...
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...eigh the concern of demerits of it own.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, after all, for example, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47671840355 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34771012126 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470066518847 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.09739468 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.125 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246299034361 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831514146379 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653678375893 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162302611524 0.150856017488 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338531862408 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.01818996416 84% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.