I am not agreeing with above mentioned statement that no need of extended families because extended families are beautiful family, it should be promoted by the today's youngster.In this growing technological people started forgetting about the old traditional and our culture which is not good. Even though we changing the old technique for the beneficial good version, certain things old things we can not or should not.
First of all, I want to explore the benefits of extended families system, in this family we can see so many relation like grand father, father, mother, sisters, brothers, aunty, uncle and so on. The relations are not burden, they are our supporter and well wisher, they living for us for nothing.
Further more, this family us financially,emotionally,psychologically and physically. For some one in their family studying well but his/her father is not earning well, remaining family members will definitely they will them for their higher. Even it happens in my life, my uncle helped me to complete my graduation even he is no educated well.
Nevertheless, the extended family share the duty and responsibilities with the whole heartily like cooking, dressing up the children and taking care of the elders. when someone sick the total happily will support him in all aspect. even if there is need of body organ for survival, family happily ready to do donate with out any hesitation but nuclear or small families can't expect the same thing from the stranger.
Next i want explore the dis advantages of the small families, among the so many problems children's lonely are very common problems in this modern world. The research says that only one child in the family longing for good companion for playing and to share their thoughts.
Finally, I want to conclude that in order to satisfy your life, to get get true love and affection, to get the physical, emotional, social and moral support, everyone of should encourage the extended families style.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'well', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215789473684 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.131578947368 0.158761421928 83% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0894736842105 0.0866891130778 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0815789473684 0.046263068375 176% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0710526315789 0.0685040099705 104% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1 0.118717715034 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0447368421053 0.0351676179071 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23820191974 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210526315789 0.0309702414327 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00526315789474 0.00188951952338 279% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0842105263158 0.0887237588012 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0236842105263 0.0209618222197 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00526315789474 0.0139019557991 38% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2041.0 2387.08602151 86% => OK
No of words: 326.0 408.028673835 80% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26073619632 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374233128834 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.291411042945 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.199386503067 0.174417080927 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.101226993865 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23820191974 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.524397521467 113% => OK
Word variations: 66.7351197071 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0769230769 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5953368094 48.84282405 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.0 120.699889404 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.5533526081 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.615384615385 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.54480286738 433% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 54.2180273714 45.7405998639 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.26851851852 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261219607349 0.300154397459 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0845544310485 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0515039327676 0.0752933317313 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639049401975 0.497263757937 129% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166624570938 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106797856276 0.114077575197 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508999691227 0.0781384742642 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.231657650475 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0966546398346 0.067059652881 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157182816287 0.210909579961 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418876865401 0.0618886996521 68% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 76 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23 Out of 30