Whether television is a companion for human beings
In the modern world, television has become a common sighting in every household. Although television has provided lot of benefits to the mankind, it has negatively impacted our lives to a great extent. This essay will discuss whether the television can be a good companion to human beings.
Television is part of almost every home irrespective of their financial status, barring few exceptions. The most common uses of television include getting updated about the trending news all over the world almost instantly, as a medium of entertainment and as a tool to gain knowledge about myriads of topics of interest. For example, a school student watching National Geographic channel on television gets information about the life cycle of a Penguin that lives in Antarctica or can watch the latest rocket launch by NASA. Hence, television is an extremely powerful medium for communication and entertainment and can act as a true companion for human beings.
Although television revolutionized the media industry, it is also known to have few adverse side effects as well. Certain people watch television for long hours which can result in less social interactions, as well as they are at risk of straining their eyes or develop obesity due to long hours of being seated at one place. For example, a study done at a university in the USA showed that watching too much television was one of the top 5 reasons for obesity among college students in the country. However, these adverse effects can be controlled by restricting the number of hours television is being watched.
This essay argued on the topic that television is a good companion for human beings or not. Based on the facts, it is evident the advantages of television outweigh the disadvantages. In conclusion, television can be used as good friend for human beings if used within certain limits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 307.0 242.827586207 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04885993485 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89042020484 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2594337845 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 104.977214359 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.25397266985 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495959039878 0.242375264174 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178936243541 0.0925447433944 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141945682608 0.071462118173 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316435231298 0.151781067708 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102575609045 0.0609392437508 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.