The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education

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The solution to the overpopulation of this planet is education

Submitted by nhk on Thu, 10/04/2018 - 11:21

The world population has been steadily increasing especially in the developing and underdeveloped world. Various solutions to curb population are in consideration by the different government. This essay will discuss how population explosion can be curbed with the help of education

Overpopulation affects the earth in many different ways like food scarcity, pollution, poor living conditions etc. Often it is noted that the population has been increasing drastically in very poor or developing countries of the world. For example, in India 20% of people are illiterate and it is also the second most populated country in the world. This points to the fact that lack of education leads to overpopulation.

Various other solutions to overpopulation have also been suggested by different politicians and bureaucrats, like one child policy, increasing the taxes for families having more children etc. But these extreme measures would be clearly violating the fundamental rights of a human being. For example, one child policy imposed in China lead to discontent among its citizens and trigged a revolt against the government. Hence, it is a better idea to inculcate a strong awareness in the society about the negative impacts of the steep increase in population. This enables the citizens of the plant to take a conscious decision to curtail the population growth.

This essay discussed negative effects of overpopulation and strategies to curtail the same.Based on various facts presented it is evident that education is the key to solving the problem of extreme growth in population.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, so, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42338709677 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09664555764 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 139.433497537 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 379.143842365 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0245207903 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.083333333 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.25397266985 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202254965684 0.242375264174 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686382009895 0.0925447433944 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766986833619 0.071462118173 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129484865639 0.151781067708 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346898953294 0.0609392437508 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 12.6369458128 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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