Recently, the phenomenon of attracting people to extreme and adventure sports and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that this kind of experience cannot be highly beneficial, such an issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that these activities are dangerous, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to dismiss the extreme sports as positive exercise. At first, they are exciting and fun for young people, adventure sports such as Bungee Jumping and Skiing. However, these activities can hurt the body and make injuries for people. For example, there are reports of broken bones of people every day who do extreme sports.
In addition, these activities are used as a fun for the adventurers. But, it can bring chronic diseases like cardiovascular for people which could not tolerate this adventures. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by TNU University researchers in 2014 has shown that a significant number of people who did Bungee Jumping involved with heart diseases and mental disorders.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this topic, I profoundly believe that despite all pleasant with these entertainments, the drawbacks of them far outweighed their benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 31.9359605911 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1177.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 216.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44907407407 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98814171555 2.71678728327 110% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643518518519 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9126392765 50.4703680194 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6363636364 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908227966026 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391008755763 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546225660871 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528280684339 0.151781067708 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399944999924 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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