Recently, the phenomenon of using the employees suggestions by Authorities and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that taking workers' ideas is highly beneficial, such issue regarded as thoroughly constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that these decisions can be a plus for high-level companies, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to support decision-making helped by employees' suggestions. At first, many ordinary workers may do not be graduated in high level. However, their experiences could help to improve the production process. For example, the workers are facing to building a product closely and know the weaknesses of it.
In addition, the ideas of the employees in the production line are always ignored by managers that has been the negative effect on them. But, attending to the advice of the workers during decision-making can make them more loyal to their position and beneficial. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers has shown that a significant number of large companies profited from their loyal workers.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on this statement, I profoundly believe that the benefits of receiving the ideas from the worker far outweighed its drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48165137615 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1316974355 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 379.143842365 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.929251234 50.4703680194 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.636363636 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 20.9669160288 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117992531528 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406800814616 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371580541418 0.071462118173 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649862093535 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459408972156 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.5310837438 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.08 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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