You were absent from an important event held by the company you work for. Write a letter to your manager to apologize for this absence. In your letter:
• Tell your manager what event it was
• Say how important the event was
• State the reasons for your absence
Dear Dr.Vu,
I am writing this letter to apologize for my absence from our hospital’s 10th annual medical event.
As you’ve known, this event is held annually to summarize treatment successes from all departments throughout the year and to propose new medical innovations. In this event, our Trauma division delivered a research about a newly-tested technique of bone fracture fixation and I was supposed to have a small presentation.
I believe this should be a great opportunity to increase the credibility in conducting medical research of our department in the hospital.
Unfortunately, I could not attend this annual meeting due to some urgent problems of my family. My grandfather was hospitalized because of a severe fever while other family members were on a trip to visit distant relatives in the US. Thus, I was not able to participate and deliver my presentation. I sincerely apologize for my absence and I trust that you will understand my situation.
I hope my apology will be accepted.
Kindest regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Vu
Dear Dr.Vu, I am writing this letter to apologi...
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Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...is event, our Trauma division delivered a research about a newly-tested technique of bone ...
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Line 11, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Kindest'.
Suggestion: The Kindest
... I hope my apology will be accepted. Kindest regards,
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28915662651 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23192630728 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656626506024 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5926949242 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187794837578 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678029183789 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596528739932 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102088084038 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776539731023 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 70.7449484536 63% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 8.71597938144 154% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.