To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Society is determined by the people,their culture and the attitude they follow.A good society is one where all its people are treated with love and care ,all have mutual respect among each other and there is no hatred among people all are treated with same respect and dignity and also there are no evil practices followed among them.Society can become good if there are good people and vice-versa.Area of living do play a major role in determining type of society.To understand the important characterisitic of society, I don’t think by studying only major cities will give us all details about it.
You cannot determine important characterisitic just by studying important or major cities.Of course major cities do play important role in determining society but not all characteristics are determined by them.For example there may be few traditions which are followed in particular area not in all major areas.So if we study only major cities or areas we cannot determine all the important characteristics of that area.
Let us consider an example.Agriculture is very important sector.Farmers do a lot of hardwork for maintenance of crops.Thus farming is very important for society as well.When you consider farming in cities you cannot determine its importance.Like no one does farming in cities it is generally done in villages.So by studying only cities you cannot determine all the important characteristic of society.
There are certain customs or practices which are important to a particular society or particular area.Same may not be the case in other area.In one area if one thing is important then in other area that thing may or may not be important.Let us consider festivals also.In India there are many states and many cities .Consider festival Navratri.It is most popular in cities like Ahmedabad,Surat in Gujarat state but if you consider a state in Jammu Kashmir named Srinagar it is not that popular or it is not that celebrated .
Hence in determining any characteristic of society it is important to study all the factors and all the beliefs in an area then only you can determine its importance.Whole area should be taken into consideration not a particular area .By studying a particular area you may determine the characteristic of society of that area not as of whole.Thus we cannot say that to understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study only its major cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for example, in particular, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 395.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16708860759 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26069754888 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405063291139 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 704.065955056 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 79.0 23.0359550562 343% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4781600205 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 408.2 118.986275619 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 79.0 23.4991977007 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.2 5.21951772744 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337481382086 0.243740707755 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.20720378529 0.0831039109588 249% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978654808207 0.0758088955206 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20720378529 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0978654808207 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.4 14.1392134831 300% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.17 48.8420337079 -35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.92365168539 216% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.3 12.1743820225 290% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.89 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.38706741573 125% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 11.8971910112 479% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.6 11.2143820225 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 57.0 11.7820224719 484% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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