The evolution of technology has become increasingly popular across the globe. These days, technology can be used to to track and see what people are doing with the help of mobiles phones and security cameras without their knowledge of being monitored. This essay will discuss about the advantages of the advanced technology and how this will outweigh the disadvantages.
Technical devices like cell phones and CCTV cameras are evolved so much and available handy to every person due to the wide range of options available at low prices. Every adult on our planet now owns a cell phone as this has become a necessity for our daily routine. But, most people are unaware that they are being monitored their every activity. In many nations, it is a regime to track everyone to protect the nation from any threat and it will also be useful to track the culprits. For example, in a recent blast happened in the Hyderabad city, the police has found the culprit with the help of CCTV footage.
On the other hand, these technology has causing a disturbance to the people when they know that they are being monitored. This will also cause damage to some one personals life when it is misused. For an instance, when a CCTV is installed in a shopping mall trail room and capture the nudity of the women and upload them in social networking sites which would cause an ultimate damage to the person.
In Summary, it is usual that government uses this technology for social security reasons and helps them improve the protection to the public from any danger. Although, few people say that it is against human privacy policy, in my opinion, these activities have more positive sides than negative when used it properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...obe. These days, technology can be used to to track and see what people are doing wit...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this technology' or 'these technologies'?
Suggestion: this technology; these technologies
...of CCTV footage. On the other hand, these technology has causing a disturbance to the people...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...nitored. This will also cause damage to some one personals life when it is misused. For ...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'ultimate damage'.
Suggestion: ultimate damage
...cial networking sites which would cause an ultimate damage to the person. In Summary, it is us...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, in summary, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81016949153 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44000932461 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6591844764 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304676566878 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977075493637 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840536990345 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170698708382 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768257267897 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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