It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore physical education and sports be compulsory for all students in all schools.
What do you think?
In our life we give more importance to the education , because due tonthis we can achive our goals.some people think that only bookies knowledge is not important , child and teenagers must know the importance of physical fitness and for that physical education must be the part of school education.
As we know that body fitness and healthiness is vital for our life. But the work routine will not allow to do concentrate on that. Childerns does not get time for gym, yoga or any sports activity. As in the morning they have school and in the evening they have to attain their tuitions and complete their homework. So on the bais of this we have to think that , if sports is the part of education then childrens can automatically be the part of physical education.
In the recent era the use of mobile phones, laptop, t.v get increase. So when teenagers get free they were busy with this activity. Where as in the earlier time teenagers were playing cricket or hocky or football in their free time. But now a days outdoor activity get reduced. They just like to sit in the home in their leiser time. Due to this reason also physical education must be the part of school activity, so that they have to compulsory take Participate in sports and other outdoor activities.
Lastly, in general all are accepted that exercise is good for everyone’s health. But due to busy schedule and by decreasing the importance of playground activity, childerns and teenagers are not giving importance to physical education. But for healthy life every children must know the importance of exercise and for that physical education and sports must be the part of school activity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82578397213 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64410816093 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470383275261 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4731123975 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1333333333 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25022968686 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835199723927 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102049207235 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167514708865 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101155243762 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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