Dear Mr. Suresh,
I am taking tuition classes to the indigent students in your community since 2016. I regret to inform you that I shall no longer continue doing this work effective from December 2018.
Let me explain my situation in detail. As you are aware that I am pursuing my masters from Cambridge university and in the evenings I take tuition classes to the students who are in needy. In addition, I am also working as a physical trainer in your community based rehabilitation center during weekends which involves yoga, swimming and meditation. Do you remember my graduation day which I told you a week ago? I would be happy if you come to the graduation ceremony on next week Friday.
Could you please let me know a good time to visit you next week? I would like to introduce my junior who is extremely interested in taking over my work. He lives nearby our community and is ready to take charge to duty from 1st December.
Thanks for your consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Chandrasekhar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...d in evenings I take tuition classes to the the students who are in needy. In addition,...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...d in evenings I take tuition classes to the the students who are in needy. In addition,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78857142857 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76209917214 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1319871037 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8333333333 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234076607079 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848430929885 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713797793147 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139377361363 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056323523229 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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