You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear bobby,
I hope this letter find you and your family well. I am writing to inform you that I am moving to Canada as I want to continue my study.
Fortunately, I could get a scholarship for PhD in civil engineering from British University. Hence, my departure for Vancouver is soon. As I checked the curriculum of my courses prior, I found two days free at the end of the each week.
Since my scholarship doesn’t cover all of my tuition, so I am urged to get a temporary job. Although my parent ensured they tend to pay all my study expenses, I am personally keen to burden myself with at least half of my expense. Not only did I hear the rents are so high there, but I am also aware that food prices are not affordable.
I know that you have lived there for several years. I would appreciate if you introduce me some of the prominent placement agencies throughout your city. I definitely believe by your precious information, I will be able to find a well-paid and satisfactory job.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Abhishek Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... I would appreciate if you introduce me some of the prominent placement agencies throughout...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lacement agencies throughout your city. I definitely believe by your precious inf...
^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd a well-paid and satisfactory job. I am looking forward to hearing from you ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56783919598 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78993599116 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658291457286 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1774817931 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230969071612 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088222397933 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792051401831 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14055110386 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110744459971 0.0580467560999 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.