Some people only have pets to not feel lonely, for example, but they don’t always take proper care of them. Do you think people who don’t always take proper care of their pets should be allowed to keep them?
Depression in this world is a tragic disease which is affecting many people in the world. To get rid of this chronic disease people have pets in their house so that they do not have a feeling of loneliness. These days, there is an ongoing debate between people that those who do not take proper care of pets should not be allowed to keep them. In this essay, I shall provide my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
Pets cannot express their feeling by talking or showing anger. However, as a human being, we need to understand their feeling and should take care of them. Firstly, if a person cannot take good care of the pets, he should avoid keeping them at his place. Taking care of the pets are not as tough as compared to a human being. Although, a pet has some needs like proper food, time to play with them and timely cleaning.
Those who argue that it is not a job of people to take care of the pets have a different view and prospect, according to them it can actually be a good thing to not allow pets to be at home. Firstly, it is claimed that it is unfair to capture an animal in a house. The animals should be in their community like human beings live. Having an animal is not a good way to get rid of loneliness. However, a human can have different remedies for their loneliness, for instance, having social interaction.
While there are strong views on both sides of the case, my personal view is that if people are fond of keeping pets in their homes then they should take care of them. In another case, they should not be allowed to have pets with them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 20.9802955665 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30897009967 5.00649968141 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20781055224 2.71678728327 81% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46511627907 0.580463131201 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 407.7 379.143842365 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6194535049 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0625 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8125 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 2.75862068966 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46135718326 0.242375264174 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157882529304 0.0925447433944 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111780680006 0.071462118173 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302807042034 0.151781067708 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389580999403 0.0609392437508 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 12.6369458128 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 11.5310837438 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.32886699507 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 55.0591133005 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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