The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The first diagram illustrates the process of manufacturing cement, and the second diagram gives information about how concrete is made.
As can be seen from the production of cement, there are totally five steps, beginning with the input of raw materials and ending with packaging finished products. Producing concrete requires four materials mixed together.
The first stage of production of cement is that limestone and clay are placed in a crusher to manufacture a powder. This power goes through a rotating heater after being mixed. After that, the heated mixture is put into a grinder to form a cement. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags.
After the cement is bagged and delivered to building sites, these bags are used to produce concrete. There is a formula to get the best concrete for constructive aims. The concrete consists of 10% water, 15% cement, 25% sand and a remaining half of gravel, which pours into the concrete mixer. Then, this machine rotates to mix four materials as the completing concrete.
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 56
- The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. 78
- The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared 44
- There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we needmusic? Is the traditional music of a country more important than theInternational music that is heard everywhere nowadays 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 296, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the cement is packaged in large bags. After the cement is bagged and delivered...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62331837716 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8569241328 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315801261979 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103379135209 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748818029875 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175695852972 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650712548891 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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