We are all familiar with maxim that music in universal language and there is much truth in it. It is heard by all living beings with great interest and for different purposes. The few people believes that it merely leads to advantageous for people, while others reckon that it has bad impact on them. This essay will consider the both views before a specific conclusion.
There is no doubt that mankind has plethora of benefits from music. Most of the people are used as entertainment, meditation, and for other reason. It works as stress buster, especially for those people who are victims of anxiety. It can be seen that most of the individuals are depressed by the their personal life's problem and it become exacerbated their life, due to listening calm and magnificent melodies they can relief from this kind of diseases. Moreover, there are many influential people who are involved in music industry in different profession namely, as singer, music-composer, studio artists, label owners, musicians. so, people can obtain as career option in this specific field and get famous in the world and live prosperous life.
However, sadly, now music has been extensively changed in bizarre image as compared to the prior time. Nowadays, many music producer are produced the inglorious music even, this music is liked by every group of young generation. But, it is strongly linked with crime like they add some vulgar words in their melodies because our ethic values not give us to speak those kind of work. as a results, adults become emulate it in their life and get indulge in anti- social activities. There is no denying in the fact the antisocial lyrics calling situation can lead to scenes of destruction and havoc. Banning or bar this kind of music is not question or in fact the solution. That goes the fundamental right of freedom of speech.
To recapitulate, we should avoid those type of mentioned music which leaves the bad impact on society and young generation . Relatively, in my perspective the music is key of human life, which give tremendous happiness to the human being as well, mesmerize them by the peaceful rhythm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ess buster, especially for those people who are victims of anxiety. It can be seen that...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
...ost of the individuals are depressed by the their personal lifes problem and it become ex...
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Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...the their personal lifes problem and it become exacerbated their life, due to listenin...
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Suggestion: So
...tudio artists, label owners, musicians. so, people can obtain as career option in ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun music seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much music', 'a good deal of music'.
Suggestion: much music; a good deal of music
...s compared to the prior time. Nowadays, many music producer are produced the inglorious mu...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'those kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; those kinds
...e our ethic values not give us to speak those kind of work. as a results, adults become em...
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Suggestion: As
...ot give us to speak those kind of work. as a results, adults become emulate it in ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...give us to speak those kind of work. as a results, adults become emulate it in their life...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, in fact, kind of, no doubt, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93628808864 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62772095785 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590027700831 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9292373151 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7894736842 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244902365314 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675351705209 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515228575775 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136796829217 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362772110481 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.