People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Why do people attend university? There are a number of reasons to illustrate why people attend university. Some go to university to make friends from different cultures or gain exciting experiences while others attend university to absorb a wide variety of knowledge or develop skills necessary in their future career. In my view, people attend university to learn how to make use of their own time and how to cooperate with others.
People attend university to learn how to make use of their time. Often after attending university, students will soon find out that their time is divided strictly by studies, extracurricular activities and part-time works, so the need of learning how to manage time is essential for them. For example, when I was in university, I had to study in the morning and worked at night. On weekends, I also needed to practice with my band. Therefore, I had to manage my time wisely and efficiently, or my school life would always be in a mess. Learning to manage time, as a result, is the reason why I think people attend college.
People attend university to learn how to cooperate with others. Cooperation, no doubt, is one of the most critical requirements by every job. By working with classmates on different assignments, one has a chance to learn the importance of cooperation. For example, I took a course of English Literature in my second year at university and I needed to work with my classmates on many assignments. If I didn’t learn how to work with my classmates in that time, I wouldn’t know how to work with my future colleagues. This will be an obstacle for me when looking for an employment. Learning to work in a group, therefore, is the reason why I think people attend university.
The reasons why people attend university are simply too numerous to name. In my opinion, learning to manage time and cooperate with others are the reasons I believe why people go to university.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-12-23 | MRoy | 70 | view |
| 2019-11-25 | thakannv | 76 | view |
| 2019-11-10 | Vaibhav Panchal | 60 | view |
| 2019-11-10 | Vaibhav Panchal | 60 | view |
| 2019-10-08 | Shelby18k | 70 | view |
- Some people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choic 65
- People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, second, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, no doubt, as a result, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83783783784 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92966299557 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456456456456 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.1164331152 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7894736842 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306573939146 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140511193756 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117222844254 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236100843991 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695160993735 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.