You and some friends had dinner in a restaurant a few night ago. The service at the restaurant was terrible and the food was bad. You and two of your friends had severe stomachaches the following day. The food was also overpriced.
Write to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
Explain these problems
give details that you think are relevant
ask the manager to do something about the situation.
Dear Sir,
I along with my friends had dinner at your restaurant situated at the Auburn Hills on 5th October,2018. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on inferior level of Service and low quality of food served to us. On top of it, we were charged exorbitantly for it.
Let me explain it in detail. First, regarding the service, we are made to wait for 30 minutes even when there were unreserved tables and on top of it, the waiter approached us only when we called him. To make the matter worse, two of my friends suffered from food poisoning which gave them a terrible pain in the stomach.
I strongly suggest that you immediately improve the quality of food by having it thoroughly inspected by a skilled chef. Additionally, I would recommend to train your staff periodically on essence of customer service.
I am sending a copy of this letter to the local newspaper along with the food department to ensure that you will take the necessary steps.
Yours faithfully,
Ranjan Goswami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'October 2018'.
Suggestion: October 2018
...ant situated at the Auburn Hills on 5th October,2018. I am writing this letter to express my...
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Line 6, column 144, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend training'.
Suggestion: recommend training
...y a skilled chef. Additionally, I would recommend to train your staff periodically on essence of c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80113636364 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80273787889 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670454545455 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8362576494 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188359134912 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616413415517 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615239333187 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996468315622 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407139358085 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.