Some people consider thinking about the future and planning for the future to be a waste of time. They argue that people should simply live in the moment.
Do you agree or Disagree?
Most people spend their life in planning and preparing for the future. There are some people who believe that one should live in the present and not worry about the future. Although it sounds very convincing, I believe that one just cannot neglect their future for living in the present.
In order to have a better tomorrow, it is extremely important to meticulously plan for it in the present. Because only through planning a detailed roadmap can be created and the goals can be achieved smoothly. For instance, if governments don’t predict and plan for achieving the desired GDP growth then it will lead to massive unrest in the country due to unemployment. Hence, the importance of future planning cannot be ignored.
In addition to it, planning gives a person a motive and a goal in life. This motivation helps him to move through his life and give a sense of purpose to live. For instance, an athlete is clear about his future goals and this clarity gives him the strength to continue his daily practice. Moreover, we are not going to be forever young and also there is no guarantee of jobs after a certain age. So, it becomes all the more important to plan and save money for the old age. If one does not plan for this then meeting the expenses for food and health will literally be impossible.
All in all, according to me, it is imperative that one plans for the future. Otherwise, it will be lead to terrible consequences in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
... cannot neglect their future for living in the moment. In order to have a better tomorrow,...
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Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...est in the country due to unemployment. Hence the importance of future planning canno...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66795366795 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52572813939 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5019915394 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.6 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261599646524 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908149940015 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559632043295 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138379357401 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741464911347 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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