Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
In general, the way we think about life and how we spend it depends on our age. As we grow older, our view upon life changes, so will our behavior and way of living. This will directly affect how we will enjoy life. Some people believe that when we are young, we enjoy life more. From my point of view, young people indeed enjoy life more than older people, for two main reasons.
The first reason that immediately comes to mind is that we have a lot more energy when we are young. We have so much enthusiasm and excitement. We are fresh, energetic and robust. Our body is also at its best shape and ready to do every activity. In addition to that, our minds are very active, and we are very strong in terms of mental conditions and stress control. As a result, we can enjoy various activities that require certain amount of physical and mental qualities. Among those are activities such as different sports like bodybuilding, football or martial arts. Of course it would be very difficult for an old person to go to gym and lift heavy weights in order to gain muscle for example. In contrast, young people can not only do these tough sports easily, but they also can improve their abilities in them and advance to the top.
Furthermore, because of this powerful sense of enthusiasm in young people, they will enjoy other activities such as watching movies, playing computer games and going camping and picnics. On the other hand, older people are usually tired, both physically and mentally. Therefore, many of these entertaining activities do not sound so fun and exciting to them, and they often become bored very soon. As you can see, young people can enjoy many activities in life, while these activities may not be that much of a joy for older people, because of their age.
Another important reason is that young people are far more willing to experience new things in life. When we are young, we see ourselves at the beginning of a long and tortuous journey, so we are very excited to walk this path forward. We are very curious to experience new aspects of life as much as we can. Also, this strong sense of curiosity will lead to many discoveries. Learning and finding new things are enjoying for every person. Actually, it is human's nature to enjoy from experiencing something fresh that he or she has never seen or felt before. Again, older people are deprived of this facet of joy, because they have done what they could in their early years.
In sum, while there could be some positive aspects in older people's life which can be joyful such as their peaceful and tranquil life, in my view, young people enjoy the beauties of life a lot more. Not only they are full of energy to do and enjoy manifold activities, they also crave to experience new things.
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- TPO 23 86
- For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school 86
- Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom 83
- In today's world it is more important to work quickly and risk making mistakes than to work slowly and make sure that everything is correct. 73
- TPO 25 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, in general, of course, such as, as a result, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 23.0 10.4138276553 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2278.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 496.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59274193548 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32595241366 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489919354839 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 725.4 506.74238477 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 2.10420841683 428% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8126614405 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3703703704 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3703703704 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07407407407 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 8.67935871743 288% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389369466003 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110405809141 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126581281267 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264522103967 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101020968387 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.