Do u agree or disagree? Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
As the technology grows, the issue of whether the life has got easier than before has received a great deal of attention people and psychologists. Although some may argue that people in these century are not feeling comfortable and experiencing loneliness, I as well as many others believe that these days life is more comfortable than previous decades due to the development of technology and change of people’s culture. I am of the opinion that both of the mentioned viewpoints have their own merits and drawbacks, and the following explanations will further elaborate on this perspectives.
First and foremost, beyond the shadow of the doubt, technology has a great role in twenty-first century people’s life. Throughout the history, there have been great number of works which should be done hardly by bare hands. By the evolution industry, the technology has been evolved in diverse fields and works which was done by people is now done by technology. The more the technology develop, the more the life got easier. For the purpose of illustration, in this decade people wash their clothes by machine which in the past decades, before the invention of wash machin, grandparents forced to wash the clothes by hands.
Furthermore, it is established beyond the doubt that the culture of people has changed through the time. In these days people get more attention to their comfort and relaxation. They do not assiduous activities and take their comfortability as their primary priorities. As a case of point, today people prefer to travel by planes than cars due to the comfort of them.
On the other hand, It is occasionally said that these days life has been more difficult and the comfortability has not prevalent. The psychologies believe that in this machinery world people get apart from each other and they suffer from loneliness more than before. According to the research which conducted by a Japanese institute, from a large number of people who contributed to this research, most of them found the life more difficult than before due to their loneliness.
In brief, contemplating all aforementioned above, I can draw the conclusion that today life of people has been more easier than before chiefly due to the development of technology and evolution of the culture reasons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this century; these centuries
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...conducted by a Japanese institute, from a large number of people who contributed to this research...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, so, well, apart from, in brief, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 377.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12732095491 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93682949099 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474801061008 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1997596149 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.8125 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5625 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210254699267 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080185333518 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620096494658 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131711272266 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210432276123 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 11.7677419355 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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