The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
One of the pressing problems, the world is combating is global warming. Few suggest that hiking the fuel prices is a viable solution. However, I feel that making fuel expensive will not have a vast impact and opine there are several other ways such as offsetting carbon emissions and limiting deforestation, environment degradation can be controlled.
It is an undeniable fact the raising the prices of fuel will dissuade the populace in the urban areas to rely on their personal transport and rather choose other means of conveyance akin to public transport and carpooling. Few IT Organizations have been encouraging their employees by giving away meal vouchers to those who have shared a ride to work. Nevertheless, the proportion of pollution by the fumes from vehicles is comparatively lower to pollution caused by other sources. A study by renowned environmentalist Ram revealed that the percentage of carbon emissions by automobiles is only 17%, while the other 83% is from the industries like rubber and pharmacy manufacturers.
Industrial sector is accountable for a colossal amount of contamination of air and water. So, authorities should take measures to control the industrial discharge and advocate on reducing the carbon footprint by industries instead of shooting up the fuel prices. Introducing schemes to increase plantation and monitoring illegal logging can help limiting deforestation and further jeopardizing the situation.
In conclusion, though soaring prices of crude oils such as petrol and diesel can encourage the usage responsibly and aid to curb the depletion of natural resources and fuels, it would not be credited as the best possible solution. Reducing industrial wastage and deforestation will ensure sustainable development for the future generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 347, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to limit' or 'limit'.
Suggestion: to limit; limit
...and monitoring illegal logging can help limiting deforestation and further jeopardizing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51449275362 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18661016631 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2804989115 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.833333333 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812543458428 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0282498704912 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285788420718 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0492127130816 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289988731427 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.44 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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