People don’t read newspapers or watch tv news but they rely on internet for news. Is that positive or negative development?
Internet,with no doubt, has completely transformed the way we lead our lives now. We hardly find an area or sector which is untouched by internet and technology. The major breakthrough is in the field of news. World Wide Web has rendered everybody the benefit of keeping themselves updated with the latest news and events around the world. This is definitely a positive evolution.
It was not so long that many used to rely on newspapers or bulletins to be abreast of occurrences in not just their country but also on other parts of the world. Catching up with the news was considered a task when one has to either watch the news hour or wait for the next day for the headlines. But thanks to the internet, news and information that one wants to seek are available at finger tips by press of a button on mobile phones. Due to these advancements, we are able to read all the current events regardless of where we are. Either in office or at a restaurant or if we are completely on the other side of the globe, we can scroll up for the news on laptops and mobile gadgets.
The perk with internet news reports is the speed, coverage and relevance which television news or journals sometimes lack. News broadcasts and news publications may not be able to cover all stories around the country or the world. Also, these mediums cannot circulate news as fast as internet. Finally, when it comes to relevance, different age groups have varied stories of interest such as youth may be are more concerned about their favourite football club, women may be are interested in movies and businessmen in stock markets. Internet provides the convenience to browse the targeted news.
Therefore, for multitude reasons the current generation depend on internet for news rather than the conventional practice of reading periodicals and watching news prime times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, as to, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84591194969 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71664080387 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4403477341 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319136638048 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109132124316 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737497742648 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203533151344 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054762250718 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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