Educating the youth, prioritised first World wide, while few thinks that illiterate people should get as much as priority in education. Those who supporting unlearned, argues strongly to allocate sufficient fund for the same. I am completely agreeing with the statement because literacy is a human right. We can discuss the matter in depth in the following paragraphs.
As the world advance in technologies and education system so far, it became essential to be compitative. Proper education system enables the youngsters to adapt with the modern world. Developed countries shows more literacy when compared to others, which shows the cost and un paralleled system of learning.
On the other hand, illiterates are often found ignored and kept apart from the main stream of the society. It should be avoided by implimenting effective modalities makes them capable of learning self or with support. Proper governmental funding incorporates the organisations and well wishers to bring up people and make them feel worthy. Usually poverty and lack of facilities are the leading cause of the misery, equitable distribution of resources will tackle these probless. Community assessment regarding the availability of sufficient environment and materials are vital, followed by replacement of the unmet needs are important. Integrated school system enables all people to get educated and become an asset to the society.
In a nutshell, there should be no discrimination in providing education, irrespective of community,social and other preferance all should be taught equally. Proper financing and infrastructural support from government will enable a country to be best and remember, the human is best among resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, regarding, so, well, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1454.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54961832061 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10952303423 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660305343511 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3658636784 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.9333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217993207592 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622342734774 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508824983273 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119568144661 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032439840316 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.