Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
It is commonly believed that there are a lot of benefits of sharing more information, while other people hold the view that some information is not to be shared for free because of its importance and value. In my opinion, although both arguments have their own pros and cons, they are equally important and should be applied in different situations.
On the one hand, sharing information brings many certain benefits for people. One advantage of sharing information is that it helps people in finding a job or research. For instance, someone provides their name, age, career background to a service then it will response a list of suitable jobs for the clients. Moreover, when sharing information, people have many chances to meet others to collaborate or exchange experience together.
On the other hand, there is some private information that people should not provide for strange services such as bank account; they can steal money via customers' bank account. Furthermore, a few companies sell clients' email or phone for business purposes; consequently, a customer service from other companies make a call or send an email which makes people feel very upset.
In my viewpoint, it will be more benefits when users share data but they also have to protect private data. By doing so, people can get their goals in order to succeed in life. However, it is recommended that people need to pay attention to applications that they want to share personal information to keep them safe.
In conclusion, sharing as much information as can help people to find easily a valuable knowledge, which supports for study, research or life. Besides, some important information should not share for free.
- The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. 73
- The chart below gives information about the most common sports played in New Zealand in 2002. 78
- The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 67
- All parents want the best opportunities for their children There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children s future 83
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: SEND_AN_EMAIL[1]
Message: Consider using 'email'.
Suggestion: email
...ice from other companies make a call or send an email which makes people feel very upset. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09318996416 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7367416313 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0309558221 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3241600227 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129062208724 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969110886508 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195032129813 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786107251635 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.