You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to report my lost luggage and would like to inquire if anyone have turned it over in your office.

The luggage is a medium-sized, emerald green, hard case trolley which have plenty of travel stickers on it. It also have a leather bag tag attached with my name and contact details. More than my precious belongings inside it, the bag itself is of great sentimental value to me as I have been carrying it in all my overseas journeys.

Yesterday, I took the 8:00 AM bullet train from Narita Airport and stowed my bag in the overhead cabin of seat number 8C. I dropped-off at Shinjuku Business District Station and I must have been in a hurry that I forgot to account all my belongings before leaving.

I would like to kindly ask if you could give me an advise if someone have returned it in your station office. You may reach me anytime through my mobile number 0917868552x. Should it be in your custody, I will be glad to pick it up at Shinjuku Station.

Any hel extended will be very much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

Yours sincerely,
Butterfly 8i8

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 76, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...age and would like to inquire if anyone have turned it over in your office. The l...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...lenty of travel stickers on it. It also have a leather bag tag attached with my name...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...like to kindly ask if you could give me an advise if someone have returned it in your sta...
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Line 9, column 52, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...e to kindly ask if you could give me an advise if someone have returned it in your sta...
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... you could give me an advise if someone have returned it in your station office. You...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56783919598 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55685581897 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64824120603 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.794138345 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157325898907 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625503761011 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615894144988 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0882003485009 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509817184668 0.0580467560999 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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