what famous place would you like to visit? use details and reasons to support your response
Everyone has a dreaming place to visit at least one time on their life, some may love American, while other others seem to desire Europe. However, if I was supposed to have any opportunity to travel anywhere, I will not hesitate to choose Dubai. There are so many reasons for this, which I will explore two of them in the following essay.
Firstly, Dubai is home to the most, small enterprises as well as to big companies. As you know this is center of global trades, and almost every business has its branch there. So, it will be a great chance for those who want to run a company. You will notice how different companies developed, how they are stabilized, how they improve and so on. Furthermore, you encounter to many entrepreneurs from each field of business, and get advice and talk to your plans with them in order to receive feedbacks. You are required to meet Dubai if you feel you should run your own business.
Secondly, Dubai is the best destination for touristic purposes since there are wonderful places and so many people from various countries. There is a wide range of alternatives for those who want to travel to Dubai for enjoyment and relaxation. you can go to Burj-e-Khlifa, currently the tallest skyscraper that you can see the world from hundreds meters height which will be a surrealistic. moreover, you should visit Al-Fahidi historical district, if you are interested in museum, heritage areas, and so on. Not only this, Dubai is a seducing land for its diversity of people. You can see people all around the world speaking in different languages, having their own customs which has doubled the beauties of this magical city. You see Chinese hotels, American hotels and so on that serve their meals, also you see them that decorated in a way which reflect the cultures of aforementioned countries. So, in one word we can say that Dubai is like a paradise on the earth.
I strongly suggest you to travel to somewhere that you can both benefit from, to plan your futures and have entertainment. Dubai definitely will provide you such opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, at least, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78055555556 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71595082593 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7006538812 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5789473684 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153054149221 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489833903646 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430439185609 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100750817758 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021289221007 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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