it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university
By the significant development of the number of young-capable generation in modern industries, the possibility of building many universities in different areas should be limited. Personally judging, a sharp agreement is my point of view as the policy of increasing amount of universities is likely unnecessary while the drawbacks of lacking of material factors and low living standards in remote areas should be a concerning spotlight.
Firstly, the structure of one standard university with multiple educational pieces of equipment and experiential professors must be spent tremendous proportion of the budget of government which can server society-essential projects according to inclusive-urgent demands. In details, the living conditions of general citizens may not possess a chance of affording a massive tuition fees for the progress of studying while the majority of young adults usually has to work as manual labor to support family, leading to student-lacked universities. Additionally, it may be impossible for the government of country to completely provide the same level of facility qualifications to various regions because of the limitations of educational fund and number of well-trained teachers. As a result, dispensing university educational services on such a large scale may not optimize the effectiveness of education which its values is only modified by a firmly educational foundation.
Secondly, the inequality of quality and quantity of educational methods and material facilities of every university can cause the intellectual standards of the people of different levels, leading to an unbalanced workforce. In details,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8024691358 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51076806236 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61316872428 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1708137354 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.428571429 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7142857143 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134219026248 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507845761529 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381233826442 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763389011901 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02793320809 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.95 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 9.78957915832 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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