Young people say that traveling to different countries benefits them and society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Many youngsters assert that global traveling is beneficial for themselves as well as the society. In my opinion, I wholeheartedly agree with this idea.
Firstly, traveling can help the young relax after work or study and bring profits to the tourist destinations’ society at the same time. With a high level of stress at work or school nowadays, having a break to travel to multiple countries around the world will clear young people’s mind to continue their work when they return to their homeland. Likewise, with a huge number of young travelers, tourist destinations will definitely gain massive profits as young people are willing to spend money for their relaxation, which is certainly a mutual benefit for both young tourists and the local society. For example, Vietnamese vendors can make more money from selling traditional souvenirs while these items somehow seem to satisfy international young travelers.
Secondly, globetrotting also positively affects individuals’ home society. When young people approach new traditions and customs, they might have a great opportunity to pick up some good knowledge and new ideas to apply in their regular basis at home. The newly approached concepts from other countries will then help the young change their behaviors and lifestyles to become more contributive to their own community after their trips. For instance, more and more young Vietnamese travelers are now motivated to assist handicapped people in real life as they have adapted this behavior after traveling to western countries.
In conclusion, I believe that traveling to different countries really benefit young people and the whole society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, likewise, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47876447876 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94319945651 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6138996139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9252867319 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9090909091 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227919510653 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968590695199 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704040921916 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174740961735 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712634551865 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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