Juveniles believe that visiting to the other Nations provide us lot of banefits and society as well. I completely agree with this testimany so, I will highlight the main pros of this phenomenon before my final perpection in furthur paragraphs.
First of all, travelling is a significant activity which assist us to achieve a bulk of knowledge practically and segment of youngsters conjecture that if travell to the overseas then it is very essential for country and people as well because they think that first profit is that to know the culture of others nation. Every nation have the different history so, we can get a chance to know it.
Secondly, by visiting to the worldwide it also assist to spread the culture of their own nation. For instance, many punjabi people settled in the abroad and the public of that places take respect to them because they know that punabi culture is very different and historical. As a result, it also show the popularity of host country.
Moreover, travelling to ther worldwide help us to gain our experience to interact with the foreigners which plays a crucial role to inhance the confidence level because some individuals want to study in the overseas so, this can be very helpfull to provide the linguistic skills.
To recapitulate, I intend to support my perspective that travelling to the other countries is a very good source to spread the culture of the host country and gain the brilliant experience for the juveniles to survive.
- some people think that it is better to get information or advice from other people while others believe that one can get information from the internet or books discuss both views and give your own opinion 43
- Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational,otherwise they are a complete waste of time.Do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. 56
- In many countries there is a shortage of suitable people for essential jobs.What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it? Give reasons fro your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowled 56
- Young people say that traveling to different countries benefits them and society. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion. 56
- In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem.What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem? (Reported 2017, Academic Test) 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... culture of others nation. Every nation have the different history so, we can get a ...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
...y, by visiting to the worldwide it also assist to spread the culture of their own nati...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'shows'?
Suggestion: shows
...nt and historical. As a result, it also show the popularity of host country. Mor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92828685259 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74942545415 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3105709663 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.444444444 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108208854631 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399374655519 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376853214111 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584477586271 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309286245238 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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