Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The relationship between young people and their parents is always an interesting topic. Some people consider that young people nowadays become more independent. However, the other groups of people still think young people nowadays are still childish and rely on their parents. For me, I strongly agree with the statement. Below are three reasons that I support.
First of all, young people nowadays have more information than the past. With the breakthrough of internet, young people nowadays are able to look up more information by themselves when they need to make an important decision. For example, if a young student wants to decide his major at the college. He can looks up related course and comments for the subject via internet nowadays. However, in the past, it was not easy to obtain that much resource. As a result, young people might just follow their parents' experience and guidance.
Secondly, more traditional rules are broken nowadays. Young people today don't emphasize on traditional rules that much. For example, in the past, young people in Taiwan should ask for their parents' agreement when they want to get married.
That is a traditional way to show their respect to their parents. However, young people today tend to decide their marriage themselves no matter their parents agree or not. That is to say, traditional rules nowadays have little restriction to young people than in the past.
Last but not least, young people nowadays have more income than before. That is to say, young people in the past rely on their parents for the support on economy. Then, they must listen to their parents' idea more. However, college students nowadays can earn a lot by being a tutor. In Taiwan, a freshman works in a science park can get 1 million NT dollars a year. As a result, young people don't have to follow their parents’ opinion because of economic problem.
To sum up, young people nowadays have more information than before. Besides, they like to break traditional rules and are able to make more money. Thus, they are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...decide his major at the college. He can looks up related course and comments for the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...are broken nowadays. Young people today dont emphasize on traditional rules that muc...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...llars a year. As a result, young people dont have to follow their parents' opin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, for example, as a result, first of all, to sum up, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98583569405 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4732159918 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484419263456 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5783675993 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.6923076923 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5769230769 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441920788064 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139097950555 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0928933272845 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268817784879 0.150856017488 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261981421327 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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