Media is the most prominent, ever growing technology nowadays. They can extend their information to any extent they wish. Their benefits are mainly to highlight drug trafficking,terrorism and smuggling and other crime areas. It majorly affects viewers in contrast by dealing with person's privacy, mimic violent behaviour, reintegrate back to our society, create more serial criminals.
Firstly, Media has grown to major extent in terms of Crime news. We were watching Crime news in first pages of newspaper. but nowadays, we are able to get burglary or hijacking news within 1 hour of crime. Further more, media has to convey the Crime as restricted information as Police officials convey information to public. Most of the information not told to outside world by officials. But, Media goes till the final murder story and get clear picture of murderer idea. Sometimes it explicitly provides details of crime like child abuse or human trafficking, but most times it educates people watching news or channel with crime major scenes or minor scenes.
On the other hand, Media has shown darker sides as well. By the way, there are certain news viewed by all audience and some are restricted news. But children see violent information like vandalism, pick pocketing and shoplifting, from their living room, which are negative thoughts given indirectly by media. However, most of the channels nowadays show crime scene about murder or burglary for near to 1 hour explaining how the crime happened. It's very descriptive even to 2 year old children who are spoiled to major extent. There are chances for them to mimic violent behavior.
In conclusion, Media should be restrictive in the information they share and to audience which they pass the restricted information. Parents can stop children from watching Media news from TV/Internet. But, its responsibility of Media persons to take care of society in providing valuable information. Instead, Media can show information of how investigating officer uses techniques to bring out crime in public. This can reduce the detailed information of Crime. Today's children are tomorrow's public.
- Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter thank them for the photos and for the holiday explain why you didnot write each. 89
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- Some employers offer their employees subsidised membership of gyms and sports clubs believing that this will maketheir staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in doing so.Consider the arguments from both aspects of 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.Why do you think this is happening?What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced. 22
- Politicians are responsible for protection of the environment than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , terrorism
...are mainly to highlight drug trafficking,terrorism and smuggling and other crime areas. It...
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Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...Crime news in first pages of newspaper. but nowadays, we are able to get burglary o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, well, as to, in conclusion, in contrast, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84614107717 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.986670747 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.347826087 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7826086957 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69565217391 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1913939048 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559381116107 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392370380253 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115956229534 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431025302792 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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