It is true that nowadays many people love to study online and many college are providing online studies on internet and they think people can easily study their courses from there. I believe that overall the positive consequences are significant.
On the one hand, one of the biggest advantages that if universities offer online study then it will helpful those people who do not have so much time to go to universities, as now many people went to complete their higher studies but because of time they cannot, so, for them it is a best option and more convenient for them. For example it also best for single mother students doctor and businessman. With the help of internet material they can complete their dreams of higher studies in their life. Nowadays, videos are also available of lectures and related to lessons on YouTube and other websites.
On the other hand, the second advantages is that sometimes student cannot understand answer all lesson which was taught in class and from this type of problems online study is best. For example, if you study online and there are so many sem questions for lesson and it is a very easy for them. For example, online study is also very beneficial for teachers and students somewhere like if one day teacher may have a problem with his or her body so she or he can take a class by technology because nowadays many colleges are providing online lectures and if teacher give a lecture 2 student with the help of internet then the study of student will not disturb.
In conclusion, although the internet is are taking place in some colleges and giving online study so it's a very beneficial to students and as well as teachers. It is a more likely to have a positive influence on poor people and person who do not have so much time to go to the universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 63, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun college seems to be countable; consider using: 'many colleges'.
Suggestion: many colleges
...ys many people love to study online and many college are providing online studies on interne...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...of time they cannot, so, for them it is a best option and more convenient for the...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... higher studies in their life. Nowadays, videos are also available of lectures an...
^^
Line 5, column 582, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'student' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'students'.
Suggestion: students
...ectures and if teacher give a lecture 2 student with the help of internet then the stud...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ome colleges and giving online study so its a very beneficial to students and as we...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65109034268 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49269465728 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473520249221 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.5949599547 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.727272727 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269965160309 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103996082971 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788180902569 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186112690109 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580013206162 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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