A lot of developing countries faced main issue is an increasing of people. In my opinion, I strongly believe that, the government should plan city and village structures. Therefore, in my view ministries should pay more attention for the village.
The developing countries main reason is, people gather to cities and therefore more crowded in the cities. The main reason for that, all facilities are including in the cities. Best hospitals, schools and jobs are available in the town. Furthermore, country capital city is most developed city in that country. All government offices and industrial zones are obtainable the main city. Although, harbor and airport situated the main city. Therefore, the village people are move to the main city automatically. In fact, main cities are facing a lot of problems. Traffic jams, criminal things, rapid case, and not enough space for residential.
However, this problem can solve if government have best organization. Most developed countries have quality framework for city planning. The developed cities have office and other commercial places only. The residential are out of the town. As well as, government introducing fair public transport to travel to the city. That is reliable solve for traffic jams. In addition, government office branches should open the countryside too. The government should be improved investors to move to village side and resolve the job issue.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that, all facilities should be dividing to all cities as well. Moreover, government should be improved good city and village structure and stick to the discipline too.
- In many countries, young people of eighteen year old allow to do things such as driving a car, voting and marry. What is right time to take this responsibilities?What is your opinion? 56
- Growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should Government provide new homes in the cities or countryside. 56
- Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience. 56
- Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food Do you agree or disagree 47
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The Best
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: have the best
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81904620118 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51953125 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3133875973 49.4020404114 37% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.5454545455 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6363636364 20.7667163134 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21645544656 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065683161161 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503178638479 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145665043479 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312201394354 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.85 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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